Monday, 5 May 2014

Persona Poem

Diddlydoo
He is fun, active, joyful, entertained
Surfer of waves
He likes food , dogs, and play
He is afraid of clowns, snakes, and tarantulas
He wants to see Disneyland, mount everest and  the musuem of surf
He lives in Royal Carribeans
Paddy

by Zoe Murray Coudray

Monday, 28 April 2014

What would I save if the house went on fire?

What would I save?
I saved my teddys but I really couldnt choose between my sylvanians because they both are the most valuable toys ive ever had.


Why would I save them?
I saved my teddys because I had my teddys since the day I was born and if I didnt choose my teddys I really wouldnt like to think of them without me. I really did want to choose my sylvanians but if I chose my teddys they would be with me standing in there place, but if I left my teddys at home they could not be replaced because I got most of them in France but still if I went to France to get my teddys
1. I wouldnt know where the shop is to buy my teddys and
2. I got my teddys from the day I was born so they might not be in stock or they do not sell them anymore because they would be too old .
Since I did not bring my sylvanians I can still get them back because
1. they are very popular and new so they would still sell them and
2. even though it might not be close where I live I know myself that in Ireland that they at least sell sylvanians in over 100 shops.





 thank you for reading.

The End                        by: Zoe Murray Coudray